Reviews for Black Seeds
Melissa Norvell chapter 11 . 7/23/2007
Sorry this review is going to be short, I just realized I have one minute until break is over!

I really liked what you did with Lucifer here. You managed to make him seem evil but not cliche'. As for your next chapter, some things do seem like they'll be cliche' but not enough to turn me away from it.

Then again, I'm a writer that likes to make you believe something will happen and completely flip it around to make you say - what the fuck? I didn't know that would happen?

Oh and as a side note, I'll be updating Sacrifice today.
Melissa Norvell chapter 10 . 7/16/2007
It's fine really. I accept your apology. Updated the story too if your still intereted. I should have probably explained these things in the beginning.

But on to the story...

I really like how you made Lucifer and Lazarath come across. Sacrifice will have a small part with Lucifer and a character of mine named Lazerath, but he's a Hell Hound of sorts.

Your story is definitely interesting, and I'll continue to read it faithfully.
Souzou-chan chapter 10 . 7/13/2007
Pony chapter 10 . 7/13/2007
Your story scares me a little, but I like the way you write ; I think the way you described what Lucifer did made him seem kind of cool.

By the way, shouldn't the 7 sins be Greed, Lust, Pride, Wrath, Avarice, Envy and Sloth? O.o I thought Gluttony and Greed were the same thing.
Melissa Norvell chapter 9 . 6/27/2007
It's good to see someone I know here that still writes, and I was happy that you reviewed Sacrifice (in which I Messaged you a comment in response to you)

I remember you from Into the Void. Thanks for being such a fan of my works.

But onto the story itself.

Very captivating and I must say that I'm hooked on it. This is a prime example of the good writers around here who come up with original ideas and not the same ho-hum things. You've got a great story here, and I, for one will keep reviewing it until the end.
Souzou-chan chapter 9 . 6/26/2007
About darn time! But it was worth the wait! No idea yet which sin appears here, but we shall see!

Smell ya later!
Souzou-chan chapter 8 . 1/2/2007
Another excellent chapter! Too bad Sven didn't choose a righteous path away from his sloth ways but really . . .he was blinded by his "paradise" after all . . .oh well.

You've done something a lot of people have trouble doing: You've taken who is normally a vile and hated figure in Lucifer and you've made him an anti-hero of sorts, one that readers love to read about and root for, hoping he saves one soul but then you become sad as the human is too far gone to save.

Though I have one question. If I remember correctly, you said there are 6 Black Seeds no? But aren't there 7 sins? So I was wondering why you don't have 7 Black Seeds?

Anywho, I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! Catch you later!
Souzou-chan chapter 7 . 12/28/2006
Ah cliffhanger! How cruel! But it is very good, I could not stop reading even though I should be getting ready for work, haha.

For sure though, I will add this to my favorite stories so I may keep an eye on it. I would love to read more about these Black Seeds. _

And btw, your writing skills are excellent. Don't doubt yourself!
KimonoQueen chapter 4 . 12/9/2006
Your story is really very interesting. When I was reading it I kept imagining it could really be a J-Horror film or one of those 'abstract' films like many Japanese horror movies tend to be anyway ;; I was deeply engrossed in it. Your writing style is very cinematic like that, and refreshingly fluid. I hope that you will be adding to this regularly as the underlying concept has so much potentially that you are consistently releasing. Your Lucifer is so charming in all his complacency and something like intelligence. And I'm intrigued by that Hoshi character. Argh if this were a film there is no way I would take a bathroom break! And if it were a series I would watch it religiously and buy the box set in the extended special edition at full price. I wouldn't even search it on Ebay for a discount lol
Kakyou Takashiro chapter 3 . 11/28/2006
definitely one of the most enjoyable reads today, if not on fictionpress period.

expecting nothing less on the next post.

hanibanii chapter 2 . 11/20/2006
i'm totally liking the story! it's so unpredictable which makes it really awesome! please continue. this is interesting
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 2 . 11/20/2006
Hey Great Story! Can't wait to read more.. come check mine out sometime "Two Classes Two Worlds" update soon
Terryll Preston chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
I have to admit, I usually avoid reviewing short, prologue chapters like this; choosing instead to wait for the actual story to begin and then make an adequate judgment. But, the concept and imagination present in your prologue simply just drew me in, compelling me to give you a review. I like the direction that this might be headed in! And if it's inspired by 'Se7en' then that's all the more better! I won't hand out my usual comments on grammr and spelling seeing as this isn't a 'true' chapter per se, but you can be damn sure I'll be looking in on you from time to time to check up on your progress, Nanao! Consider yourself FAVED!

Oh yeah, and don't think so down on yourself or your talents (read your profile page)! If you start to think negatively about your writing skills, your work will show it! Try to be positive about what you write! I don't know if this will help you to gain a little more confidence or not, but just know that you at least one author on Fictionpress whose waiting eagerly for you to update your writing...

See you next review!

Terryll Preston, still2twisted of Fictionpress infamy...
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