|Reviews for Where?|
| lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Nice haiku, it's really good!
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
It is fine. I mean, I am no Einstein when it comes to haikus anyway. So, good job, and God bless!
| Tikvah Ariel chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
Haikus are tough, I give you that, however I felt as though this poem lacked punch.
For having so little space, you repeated more than needed. Superman and savior, the where are you was asked twice. I thought that this poem could be really powerful if it was written in a more obviously dependent way, such as the speaker is clearly unable to hoist herself out of problems and is wishing for something that is unrealisitic.
It has potential, but I wasn't a big fan. Good luck though