|Reviews for Light, Dark and Shadows|
| a Cornucopia of Love chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
I liked this story! - It was fun to read, and I liked the characters and the humor. xD I wonder where you are going with this, and I hope you write more! My only constructive crit is that I think you need more description. I mean, you have description during the battle scenes and such, but other than that, I'm confused at some parts. ;_; Like, where are they? Are they on Earth? Are all the townspeople humans? Or are they in some city in Heaven, and the people are lowly angels and they are the elite? And what's a Gundan? I think with a little bit more description and an explicit setting, this story would be awesome! xD Oh, and you have some grammatical errors, too, but we all make those! Happy writing!