Reviews for The Narcisse
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I liked this poem, truly I did! For it's interesting and origonal theme, because it made it so much more enjoyable to read. However, formatting again! I've explained in my last review how I did not appreciate your style of formatting - I don't want you to change your whole writing style for me, but in my opinion, it would make it look better and bring the setences all together.

Sorry!

- Clap Trap, from Review marathon [link in my profile]
felicia13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
The shorter length works for this piece. It makes it seem more emotionally stunting, somehow. It's nice. Way to go.

Felicia.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Nice poem. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott