Other than saying that for some reason, Seth's attitude makes me chuckle a little, the most i have to say on this chapter is... I wonder what the girls will have in store for him

Finally get around to reading and reviewing. The Christmas chapters were quite sweet, and this latest chapter... well, the only thing thing I can really say about it is that Celeste's in denial about her and kids... should you put some sort of epilogue that takes place in the future, I'm really curious to see how that would turn out. Otherwise, as I always say, keep up the excellent work on this story.

A very cute chapter. Only a few mistakes, like repeating "she knocked on te door" at Sana's visit, but I see fewer and fewer mistakes! Finally Celina's secret revealed, and in a great way too! I would have never suspected a soap opera star. Thanks for the new chapter! Keep up the good work!

And once more, you don't fail to deliver an excellent character-development chapter. Personally I like how you took the stereotypical pretty-boy type of figure and turned it on it's head. A boy with loving sisters and very good appearance, and yet instead of embracing it, he rejects it. Then again, that's just one of the many reasons why I love this story. Plus I now want to see what the little cliffhanger you left us is going to amount to.

Great chapter! I saw no grammar mistakes, good job! It's good to get to know the side characters, and a nice change of pace. Kepp up the good work.

I like Sylvia's points of views as much as Celeste's, this is a really great story and so far the longest I've seen on this site (though I haven't really browsed much). Thank you for being so dedicate, I would never be able to submit 50 chapters or episodes.

On one note, you constantly use "collage", but I think you mean "college", collage is a collection of art in one.

Love your story, can't wait to read more!

Well, that was an interesting little chapter into how the parents met. Not much to say otherwise, beyond that it was well done, and I loved the irony at the end.

Dammit, it's been far too long since I last reviewed, since I've been reading the chapters but not hitting the review button after. Anyways, the character development is excellent, as always, and that's what I'd say makes this story great. Especially this chapter, with the twins. It's a shame you'll soon be ending this, but as they say, all good things must come to an end. I'm just hoping for it to end on a high note, and maybe some sort of epilogue even. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the ending chapters.

I really love this story. The characters are very well written, especially Celeste. The relationship between her and Seth is so unique and real.

A very good job! :D

I finally get around to reviewing after a bit of an absence (I think). But anyways. The story has been its usual excellent self, and for Celeste to do what she did... she truly is devious and overall unpredictable. Now, I'm curious as to who Sylvia will choose.

I absolutely love this story! Other than a few odd spelling mistakes that anyone can make, it is great! I can't wait for more of the story to come out. Thank you for a very enjoyable read!

LOVE the story so far! I can really picture this as a manga/anime that would sell in Japan! You're very good at writing, and your characters are unique, likeable and funny. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (which I will start reading immediately, I just wanted to put my two cents in). I'm interested to see how the pairings will work out. Currently my vote is for Seth&Celeste, but I like Sylvia too, lol. Anyway, good job!

~ Anne Nye

p.s. Have you ever seen an anime called Ouran High School Host Club? There is a guy/subplot in it that is almost exactly like Damien and his cult. That's a good thing though, it's hilarious!

Well, this is what you call a story out of left field. But I'm supposing that although this hints at a few things, it's but a one shot story? Even if it has a continuation, it was excellent by itself. However, whichever things go from here, I look forward to the next chapter, as per usual

wow, random but interesting

And Celeste finds that even she is still a female (or that's the subtitle I give to these last two chapters)! Anyways, chapter really well done, and her passing out from those words... not exactly unexpected, but I still found it quite awesome (I'm mean, ain't I?). Can't wait to see the next chapter and how things are going to continue, even if it's like normal.