Reviews for Haze
Starblaster1234 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Wow...that is truely amazing! I love your word choice in the poem and the occasional rhyme helped the reader (me) along.

The feelings represented in the poem are real life thoughts put into words.

I don't know what else to say but great job on this one!
D. Rochelle chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Bravo for a wonderful rhyme scheme and word choice. This piece really flows.

Nothing to critique, really. Well done!

Seraph