Reviews for Starlight
Perdix chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
'Sweetness, it’s the night(cap) speaking'

loved it. wish i could write free verse like you.

xLuke
Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Whoosh. This poem is amazingly spellbinding. I was captured by the summary and lead all the way through.. and you never lost your feel, but instead made me want more. You really need to write again, I noticed you haven't in awhile..
Jezsh chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
I loved the line 'slurring your own edges'; something so gorgeous about it. I think that the format is really effective in places but is perhaps a little overdone in others. Overall I loved the tone of this, some ways like a whisper, others like a hiss.
Ajna chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
I love the style of this and the formatting, it's very effective at making up different tones of lines & words in the reader's head. Great piece!
Iris Early chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
you are so talented you make me want to burn every word i've ever written.
iris fucking early chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
'it's the night(cap) speaking' and 'scantily clad contempt'.

fucking YEAH.

nice one, wifey-lady. x
maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
Wow. I have to say, I'm spellbound by this poem. Even reading it several times over... It's beautiful, but I have to admit there are parts that I just don't understand. Then again, poetry has never been my forte.

[Dancing (by herself)/ Poeple will only take so much/ Scantily clad contempt] Those lines were really awesome. You have a powerful way with words.

Peace -
Christybell chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Yay, a new poem!

Its been ages.

"The road shines with spilt uncertainty"

I love your poetry becuase its so god and i'm jealous. Sniff.

Review mine, you biatch.