Reviews for Brown eyes Hypnotize
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
wow this is
Star chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
you won't believe this.

my name is Claudia, but my friends call me Star. i'm mexican, aka latina and i am 1/4 colombian. haha.

nice writing. i loved it. i like her. she is def latina and spicy. and nice set up for the rest of the characters. i will keep reading. thanks so much for writing and sharing. it kicks ass!
EverythingWeHad chapter 9 . 10/21/2007
Wow...Update?
julieell093 chapter 9 . 10/1/2007
update soon plz! [[
UponAtlas chapter 9 . 9/23/2007
itz good, continue it
Lauren chapter 6 . 8/30/2007
The kissing sence was great. though i don't get the turned me around so my back was to the wall thing but other than that it was great.
xjennnny chapter 9 . 8/30/2007
awesome :]
September Sapphire chapter 9 . 8/30/2007
Not gona lie i kinda love Ruben! are we gonna see more of Jordan?
yO chapter 8 . 4/2/2007
I LOVE THE STORY.

I usually don't read short stories.. but it seemed so captivating.. XD

Please UPDATE.. I can't wait to see who she chooses.. Personally, I like JASON!

Yeah! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
xjennnny chapter 8 . 3/27/2007
i love this story it is hilarious. please continue! *begginng one knees* :P please update! i wanna kno wat happens *whining* XD
jen chapter 8 . 3/6/2007
love ur story. hope u decide to continue cause i am really bored and i want to no wat happens. so please update...yeah...well please nd thank you
trishh chapter 8 . 2/27/2007
awe, how cute. love your story.. makes me feel all giddy )

hugs- buhbye

-TRINITY
PaintSunshine chapter 8 . 1/31/2007
haha funny indeed. signing out. love it. ]

HAPPY B-DAY TO ME. ] er...2 days ago. which meant the 29th. ]
Da Vinci at Work chapter 8 . 1/28/2007
Uh oh...triangle problems. I didn't think this chapter was bad. It was good. Poor Star; she is suffering pretty bad.
jellybeancurd chapter 8 . 1/28/2007
great story going on! But I can't decided between Jason and Jordan! Though, she seems to have MUCH more chemistry with Jason. Wonder what will happen when they go to school...
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