Reviews for Invisible
Forever Forbidden chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
Wow, I like it a lot. The needing feeling this brings out is authentic. Good job!

Ashelin chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Very relatable. Great job. I totally understand though, feeling like they never notice you. I suppose my advise is, try and make them notice you, but don't be something that you are not. If someone doesn't love you the way you are, they aren't worth it. God bless!
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
Good show of emotions.
Terra Fire chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
This is a very good poem. I can feel a lot of bitterness in here. It really hit me. Great work.