I really like this, don't know if you care why. But I like it.

ooh, gotta a love the rhymings :D i like the way it all runs together. iz x

this was, unique. understatement. that's like saying hitler was not nice.. i haven't seen anything like this before on FP. the only this i compare it to is maybe something by Shel Silverstein. and i never compare things to him. he is my upmost favorite famous poet in existence. so.. yeah.

i loved it.

(yet another understatement)

Sky blue eyes

Wide

W-I

Stretched tight

Like lies

yay! that is wonderful, i love it lots. cos it's cool how bits could finish and then start a new phrase, but at the same time they could carry on. if that makes sense... like the bit i quoted above, the bit after could be with it or not. S

anyway, i love it x