Really clever. At least, the last line was.

Sadly, I was a bit disgusted at first, since I didn't know what doggerel was, but now that I do, I found it quite funny. "Spell check only put red squigglies/ Under two blahs, one la, and both hees" I've noticed that sometimes, it only does one until you change/ignore it, then it moves on to the next... Rather odd really, since it only happens sometimes.

Your review to yourself was definitely a nice touch.

LOL I LUVD DAT!

...kay, I'm back. And you heard me, I loved it! Maybe. Jell-O is my favorite jelly-like substance, too. But it's not even jelly-like, it's more...wiggly.

So this was CLASSICALLY gold. Look! I know how to spell now! Ahem.

(-dreamy sigh-) How I love doggerel. I wish to marry it some day. Soon. Maybe tomorrow.

[Spell check only put red squigglies/Under two blahs, one la, and both hees] Spell check says to delete the repeated word. Spell check put a red squigglie under "squigglie," too.

Spell check rules the world.

And I will leave you with these words of wisdom from a silly fellow named Brendan Hills. "Dew knot trussed yore spell chequer two fined awl yore mistakes."

Oh, he duzz int no what hees talking 'bout. :P

;)becky

;) i'm giggling...and when i giggle i get the hiccups so if i get the hiccups i blame you.

good poem! you're really good at these!

-TheCHosen1

Definitely the stuff of love notes. )

Hilarious.

I loved it. It was very good. I laughed through most of it. Doggerel... haha. It's good.

So what IS a doggerel? I guess I could just look it up, but feeling lazy right now.

Wow, something's up with fiction press. No alerts are being sent, so I can't tell when any of the people I know here have submitted anything new. Darn you fiction press!

~Bob Evans

I wonder if anyone who reads this actually knows what doggerel means. If so, then they should LOVE this peice of crap. I love the line about spell check and red squigglies. AWESOME!

Lol! this was great fun. Hi! My name's Ben, I'm a friend of Bob Evans. I saw you on his recommendations list, so I checked you out. Nice job.

B.

P.S. New The Chaos Theory book debuting Friday, aren't you exicited?

Oh god...you are the best at making no sense but having a deep meaning to things. This is great, keep things like these coming.

~Reaper

Hm... silly. Not one of your best. I'll stay tuned :-)

Well Satire, this is the most: improper, graceless, ill-bred, impolite, incorrect, indecorous, neanderthal, outlandish, tasteless, uncivil, barbaric, barbarous, bestial, boorish, brutal, clumsy, crude, coarse, uncombed, uncouth, uncultivated, gothic uncultured, undiginified, ungraceful, unkempt, unlicked (unlicked?),inelegant, unpolished, unrefined,infelicitous (what the?), unseemly,not too mention uneuphonious(your guess is as good as mine), and vulgar poem I have ever read. Nice Job and it's funny too! ~Scottie

PS. Just incase anyone doesn't know what 'doggerel' means, you just read the definition of it above.

under two blahs, and one la, and both hees, your are such a goof! ~S

After looking up the word "doggerel" (thank you, wikipedia), I understand perfectly. Quite a funny twist.