Reviews for in a red spotted dress
Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Wow. This is wonderful.

The italics add a whole other layer to the story.

It's a wonderful concept, and the narration is perfect.

Bravo.
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
wow...you know how to do italics...

and i loved that "stars in the daytime" thing...

thanks for the review by the way...

i also have this kind of prose too...you can check them out...

truly yours...
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
the use of italics amkes the poem more enjoyable. i love the description of the dress, even if it is irrelevent (i definatly spelled that wrong).

Katrina xx
paul chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
this is rude misses!

i still love you angelface]