|Reviews for in a red spotted dress|
| Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Wow. This is wonderful.
The italics add a whole other layer to the story.
It's a wonderful concept, and the narration is perfect.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
wow...you know how to do italics...
and i loved that "stars in the daytime" thing...
thanks for the review by the way...
i also have this kind of prose too...you can check them out...
| kelsi bones chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
the use of italics amkes the poem more enjoyable. i love the description of the dress, even if it is irrelevent (i definatly spelled that wrong).
| paul chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
this is rude misses!
i still love you angelface]