Reviews for You and Me
000000000 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
Very nicey! )
Brittany Macabre chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
I like your wording.

I have to admit, though, that when I read their first line I almost closed the story because I read it to the tune of the new Evanesence song... x_x

But, I'm glad I didn't.

I can relate to this, as cliche as that is to say in a review.

But, good job.

Clever flow.

Counting Petals chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
I like the structure of the whole thing, and the poem as a whole is very powerful. Nicely done!
mountaingurl chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Sad in a way but an awesome write. Could work as a song too. Thank you for the review. Keep posting and God Bless.
I like it! Your wording is really clever!
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Sad but strong, good work.