Reviews for Once A Slave II: Magewise
ddz008 chapter 22 . 3/28/2007
Wonderful chapter! T_T Poor Naeven, I don't understand him at all but he is great. He really likes Lark, right? T_T I'm glad that Lark is actually acting to get what he wants :)This is such a sweet, dramatic and great story. Update soon, please! :)
Koukasen chapter 22 . 3/28/2007
-Gasps- I loved this chapter! It was just so sweet! The Seattle part made me laugh though. This chapter made my day (I had to go to the dentist. I'm sure you understand)! I've actually come to see Naeven as a different person, maybe because his first name is used and he is opening up more and showing a kinder side of himself that he tries to hide. Overall, it was a great chapter. Keep it up!

Rose
Rachelmorph chapter 22 . 3/28/2007
Oh, the thot plickens. Wait, that's not right... well who can think when hot boys are on the brink of ravishing each other? Very very good. I liked this chapter a lot, a good mix of plot development, backstory, and boys kissing. Keep up the good work, I can't wait 'till the next one!
SerialXLain chapter 22 . 3/28/2007
I tried to read this last night when you updated... FP was a whore and wouldn't let me. It was torture.

This chapter gave me the feeling that someone might get stuck in another world? Maybe? :/ (I hate guessing... I just sound like an idiot. XD)

Seattle. Ah.

O_O Kind of out of character for both of them... O.o But I liked Lark being forceful and Sactaren not being all whorey. XD

Nice chapter. Can't wait to learn more. :D

xo
Yrvin Thornhart chapter 22 . 3/27/2007
Hola! Oh dear...here we go again...Earth references has cetain meaning to you now, doesn't it? By the way, human emotions are a tangled mess and you make a splendid blend of a mess for us. *chuckles* I don't mind. It makes my mind work and makes me analyze things in different perspectives. I swear if you were anywhere within the vicinity while I was reading this chapter, I could've strangled you, six years older or not. *grin* I hope your story gets published and a little patience in the start will pay off well.

I will be lagging in my reviews starting next week. I will be taking four units this summer so that I can graduate early next year. (at twenty, yay!) But I guarantee my unerring support to this story and to you, of course.
Out of the Orange chapter 22 . 3/27/2007
Seattle! I lol'ed.
Amindaya chapter 21 . 3/27/2007
Love it so much! Can't wait for more.
Drazuki chapter 21 . 3/27/2007
Egads! I didn't review! ::smacks self::

Well, a whole week later and I do, so at least you get your review, eh?

Well, I actually really liked this chapter. Naeven is so human in here that it makes me smile. But he also has that foreboding feature when it comes to Lark's magic. It looks like he's kind of jealous, but not really showing it.

O frabjous day! Calloo! Callay! Khas is much better!

Yeah, this is going to be short, I'm at work, and kind of need to get back to it.

Lurve it, as always!
Curb Crasher chapter 21 . 3/26/2007
It's so hard to tell what Sactaren's thinking through Lark. It bothers me, because I like knowing things, but at the same time I love it, because being (pleasantly, mostly, unless I really don't like someone) surprised is also very nice.

I just had to say that, because I just read a lot of bad cliff-hangers and I'm feeling the need to tell someone something or else I'll kill someone in my sleep and wake up next to a headless body, or something.

Also, I'm deeply sorry if I've ever said anything in that first paragraph before. I have a bad memory.
Smokey Betta chapter 21 . 3/23/2007
'The creature from the shadows' has gotten me all curious. I'm wondering if it's going to a threat of some kind, or a 'learning experience' for Lark...or a spy? And I liked the stable part...it think the horses/creatures are really interesting...I almost want a portion of the story written about them, and their stories.

The part where Lark has a flashback of Machavar...is that correct? Anyways, when Lark has a flashback of when he was raped, it seemed confusing, because it seemed as if Sactaren was doing all of this, Lark was just remembering his previous owner, but then it says Sactaren was just standing there. I know you needed this point to prove when Lark is thinking about how he must first master his emotions before he can master magic, but it felt like it was just a random panic attack that didn't have much reason other than to explain what we already know: that Lark is rather emotional and is haunted by demons of his past.

Poor Sactaren. Anyways, update soon.
Midnights Scream chapter 21 . 3/23/2007
I'm definately missing the Lark and Sactaren time. Sactaren is acting really weird too and I miss the action,but I understand that you have to explain the whole mage thing so I shall deal. Good job.:)
Ren D chapter 21 . 3/22/2007
w007, what a great chapter.

Naeven is becoming more... approachable. Its nice. Khas is going to be living in Lark's closet? That's pretty funny.
Naked Penguin Fetus For Pope chapter 21 . 3/22/2007
I'm so selfish with your story. I always want more. More more more. It's crazy but even if you posted like 20 chapters a day I'd never get enough. Well...20 chapters a day is a lot. But yeah. I'm just exaggerating over here. Oh, Lady Sactaren. Laying there and calling poor Naeven disgusting. Someone needs to deliver a quick, swift slap to her cheek. Maybe two. Or four. Maybe a punch.
FREAK THAT READS TOO MUCH chapter 21 . 3/21/2007
How old is lark? Also how long has he been living at Sactaren's?
I.F chapter 21 . 3/21/2007
I love this story! And you updated! I LOVE everything!XD And also, congradulations on your win! You deserve it!
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