| Reviews for Once A Slave II: Magewise |
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   Midnights Scream chapter 29 . 5/17/2007 *gasp* there's more yaoish action in here! And I love what Sactaren says at the end, it was hilarous. :) greatness as always. |
| Kaelidra chapter 29 . 5/17/2007 Oh, it was wonderful! Thank you! *giggels* Im so glad they made up... more then made up. Much more :D As much as I love the yaoi, my favriote part would have to be the feeling of content and need in the soft kiss in the kitchen. Keep up the good work! |
| Mortal Harrison chapter 29 . 5/16/2007 Very good. Lark is starting to get better with Sactaren. They just need to trust one another better. |
| Koukasen chapter 29 . 5/16/2007 Ooh, picnics. Well, didn't they just positively WRECK Lord Irra's house. That magic feed thingamajigger was creepy! I'm glad they caught the viper and are growing closer. Heh, I'm actually kind of sad, though, that there's only one more chapter til the end of Book 3. T.T But on the bright side, Book 4 will start! Who! Can't wait! |
| Kraheera-Raven chapter 29 . 5/16/2007 LOL... I love how he talks about his wife. |
| zoule chapter 29 . 5/16/2007 aw Naevan was worried about Lark |
| soph chapter 28 . 5/16/2007 I'm not sure if ive reviewedc for this chap already but... aw... poor sactaren his male erection-oriented pride has been wounded |
| Yrvin Thornhart chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 Hm, first of all...*glomps* Shit, I adore you! Now that is over, I might say that I was quite right in my deductions last time. Naeven is just so possessive... By the way, the viper's color mix seems to be a little familiar. I'm checking my cd's about snakes again. Good, strong and well, very passionate chapter. Naeven's mask slipped a little, ne? I am so glad... |
| Engelique chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 My goodness. I am undone. I find it very sexy when a man begs for what Sactaren was asking for. And the part where Lark pulls him into his lap and kisses him, gave me butterflies. *bites lower lip and moans*. I can't wait for more. The two of them are so scorchingly sexy together. |
| ddz008 chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 This was such a great chapter! :) It's so great that Lark is overcoming some of his fears and so sweet that Naeven cares so much for him, it's just great to see him all worried over Lark. Hope you update soon! Love your story! |
| Lavender-Drop chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 YAY! progress! Naeven was crying! He might actually stop being a meanie...okay, so that's a hopeful thought...but, really, I just wish we could see into that head of his and see why he does what he does. I can't wait for more! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU |
| SerialXLain chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 Whoa. That has to be confusing... The feeling what Sactaren's feeling thing. It almost confused me just reading it. XD I KNEW it wouldn't happen, but I couldn't help imagining what would happen if someone happened to walk in on them. Oh Lordie. :P Ooh. The golem is cool... I love how you go from steamy sexiness to suspense... ;-; I was scared. XD Oh, and I love the last sentence. Haha. Poor Naeven... xo |
| a.s. bygones chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 Naeven is such a girl sometimes. But it's cute, so it's okay. Sexy chapter, and... yeah. |
| The Lucifer Effect chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 Yay! This was a pretty fluffy chapter. It's so sweet that Naeven freaked out when he thought Lark was bitten. *so kyute of a story* I love it XP I love you XD (as an authoress) Can I have a lock of your hair? |
| Ren D chapter 29 . 5/15/2007 great chapter! :D |