| Reviews for Once A Slave II: Magewise |
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   Kaelidra chapter 27 . 5/2/2007 I have come to a conclusion, and my conclusion is thus: Once a week is not enough. In my infinate wisdom, I demand that you update three times that. Yes... Beautiful, by the way _ |
| soph chapter 27 . 5/2/2007 NO! Their relationship has gotten worse... |
| Sirivinda chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 I just really, really love this story. I wish I had constructive things to say to you, but I don't. I just want to let you know how much I enjoy reading it, and how much I appreciate your weekly updates. I find myself really looking forward to your updates, which feels a bit... Weird, somehow. But I do. I've not reviewed this story before, because it feels stupid just to leave "brilliant - please update!" comments, but yeah... Feels even more stupid not to say anything, I suppose. So keep up the great job. :) |
| Phantos chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 I'm with whoever said this first... I was hoping it was the cat that died. How can a snake cause so much damage? And where did you come up with such an amazingly horrible death? I shuddered when I read about it... but then, I only like snakes when they're in a glass cage in a reptile house. Sactaren is being an asshole, but I think he was right in most of this chapter. Lark is being far too noble... I agree, hasn't he suffered enough without taking the pain of others? I wish he could see that Sactaren's form of mercy isn't so cruel as he thinks. No glaring typos in this chapter, that I saw. If I ask (beg) nicely, could we get a short or something from Sactaren's point of view? I want to see inside his head for once. |
| Zuzanny chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 I had tears in my eyes as I read this chapter. Very sad. I hope Naeven will explain eveything to Lark in a way he can understand. |
| Ren D chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 ah dat was scary! :( lol, great chapter :D |
| Amindaya chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 Oh, that's cold. Nice chapter. I can't wait for more. |
| darknite109 chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 Wow, that was brutal. And as fantastic as usual, of course. |
| Siamh chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 Oh! This is interesting. the poor little girl though! Oh I was so hoping it was the cat that died. Ouchy. I hope you update soon! I cant wait! |
| The Lucifer Effect chapter 27 . 5/1/2007 Tuesdays are one of my favorite days, because you always update Naeven is pretty rude in this chapter, but I guess thats just his character ' Not the best chapter (the writing style is wonderful, but the spot in the story is kinda suspensful) but I still love it XD Um...this has been bothering me, but are you a guy or a girl? I assume your a guy, but you have other aliases in your profile so... |
| a.s. bygones chapter 26 . 4/29/2007 Oh, they keep being interrupted. How sad. But I liked the cuteness/drama of this chapter; it mixed surprisingly well. |
| Cold Drake Queen chapter 26 . 4/28/2007 Ok that took a little to figure out. But I think I got it. Anyway I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. |
| Midnights Scream chapter 26 . 4/28/2007 Well, that was interesting. :) I like learning more about everything and now there's a curse!Awesome. |
| ddz008 chapter 26 . 4/27/2007 Great chapter! Lark finally said it and something horrible had to happen -_- Do they love each other? They're so great together and always hurting each other. I hope Naeve can save those people, who is hurting them? Update soon, please! :) |
| zoule chapter 26 . 4/27/2007 Aw and things are awkward again... |