Reviews for SO Gay
Ishotthealbatross chapter 3 . 11/24
Lol loved the ending XD
Ishotthealbatross chapter 2 . 11/24
okay andy is awesome
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 11/24
Awww aww aww feel so bad for this poor guy :(
Life's Unexpected Turns chapter 3 . 9/7/2014
Where to begin? I love this writing style, btw. It feels really personal and sorta like I'm one of Kenny's friends - "good friends" - and he's telling me all this stuff. The problems are all real, and you conveyed them amazingly, which is sorta hard to do. And I applaud you for breaking from the cliched-ness of all stories based around gay couples or something like that :) beautiful
Voidpoint chapter 3 . 5/29/2012
Loved this.
velefried chapter 3 . 1/15/2012
This must be the best short story I've encountered in ages. Your voice is magnificent and so full of personality. Kenny's inner monologues were quite entertaining. I love how you took the "falling for best friend" cliche and punched it in the face, showing that people can and do move on. Thank you for sharing your talents, and you can be sure I'm going to check out some of your other stuff.
Miss Pessimistic chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I probably should check out the next two chapters before I say anything about updating, so I'll just critique this chapter to say your writing style is amazing. What fanfictions do you write and for? c:

Absolutely hilarious, love lots.
AdriannaRomantica chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
I loved your format! I loved how he was talking to me, not just sharing what was going on, but actually talking to me. It made it that much more relateable (no that I can put myself in his shoes but still!). The story had great moments of laughter, even though it was really short, I still enjoyed it very much! Thanks a bunch for sharing the story with us u
Homo Explosion chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
"Keep your knees together, keep your back straight, how to bend over – keep those knees together!"

When I read this I looked down and saw I was slouching and my knees were really far apart... I sat up and put my knees together and everything. XD
Feeshes chapter 3 . 5/9/2011
XD Dude, that was the most amazing and random ending. Like ever.

I'll have you know you're amazing... And all I can see next to this review box is the words 'vagina for an ass' which is honestly a creepy thought... Err... Moving on.

I loves your writing my old man friend. Tis' the best.
Ioga chapter 3 . 4/30/2011 THAT's why women wear high heels. I thought it was for extra height and a craving for foot pain! (4 inches sounds like quite a bit too, even if it's a "give-up" on 5-inchers. Brr.) At last I'm safe to skip them with good conscience. ;)

These stories are just incredibly educative. I had this Agatha Christie innocence level detective agency in Botswana book going on and I just haven't looked its way at all, reading this transgender/gay/etc stuff all day instead. Almost done with The Girl For Me, but I figure I'll have to review it once it's been appropriately finished.

And from that comparison, I got to thinking that maybe the big thing about this stuff is that it's _different_, a look into a life you can't just imagine from personal experience. It's what makes depictions of old Botswana interesting when coming from the north (even if the author didn't actually live exactly there etc), and it's what makes transgender and gay romances - in the style you write them, particularly, where the characters actually have to wade through a lot of the muck that is more or less regular life - fascinating.

And it doesn't hurt to get into this "omg, he's giving *me* invaluable advice on how to turn down a come-on from someone now" mode - these people do come alive, it's like the news announcer talking directly to me illusion, but in prose. (Even if the critical evaluation of the advisory material gets turned on between stories. ;))

I better hit send before I lose this on some random network failure, and continue in the next review. Thanks for this!
Ben Tramsami chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
Hee hee! That was pretty good! I enjoyed reading that! Thanks for the entertainment! :)
Keona Raynalise chapter 3 . 6/4/2009
Keona Raynalise chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
HAHA omg i love your way of thinking man the locker scene... gah! embarasing! and the car/ park scene? gah... i hate it when the charachters do embarasing things they would regret later... but then wuts a good story without em? lol love how u ended it agin though! lol u have awesome endings...
xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
That was so funny - I especially loved the ending!
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