Reviews for Lethal Trust
Niki Tori chapter 8 . 5/6/2007
I haven't read this is SO LONG! This was awesome! I can't wait to read the next ChAppie!

GoinG on to the NExT Chapter!

little fox demon chapter 10 . 5/3/2007
way cool story hope u continue it
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 10 . 4/24/2007
Its okay, Another great chapter! Why would I stop reading.. I love it. Keep it up!

Kristie Marie
KatriAdriah chapter 10 . 4/22/2007
well, this has been an interesting chapter. I was actually expecting more anger from her parents than that, but i must say, kouji's reaction to the kiss was perfect. I can't wait to read more.
Savvy0X chapter 10 . 4/22/2007
This is really different. I was just getting so bored with fanfiction that I just wanted to read something original. This is very good too, I highly anticipate the next one!
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 9 . 3/9/2007
Thanks for the cookies. Another great CHAPTER!, Keep up the good work.

Kristie Marie
sora-chigau chapter 9 . 3/5/2007
*cyber hug* You are the sweetest! I am so glad you updated! OMG! This was a great chapter! Lucky Crystal! I wish my Christmas eve was that enjoyable! lol. As always, a beautifully written chapter! I can't wait for an update! I'm so sorry I haven't been really reliable. Dumb school! I am still deeply in love with this story and am still a big fan of yours! I hope you are doing well and are very happy. You should be, you have such a wonderful talent! Hope you update soon! :)

Much love!

-Ryu (who is still jealous of Crystal)

"Jin will be mine!" Muhahah! (sorry, I'm hyper lol)
KatriAdriah chapter 9 . 3/3/2007
hmm, i wasn't really sure when i started reading, but ya know, i was being stupid. i love the story thus far, you should update soon before curiosity kills people! I hate that i just found your story, but i will DEFINATELY keep reading from now on!
sora-chigau chapter 8 . 2/19/2007
Great chapter! I really love this line: "That night, Natsumi slept restlessly, old shadows of the past creeping up on her. Forgotten doubts and worries clouded her mind, once again. Her dreams were haunted by familiar faces."

OMG! Your story always makes my heart race, it is so exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter!
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 8 . 2/19/2007
Of course I liked even though there was killing in the last chapter. Also I loved this Chapter. Keep it up. Come check out some of my poems. I havent updated my story but I will tomarrow. So check it out if you like. Great job. Can't wait for more!

Kristie Marie
sora-chigau chapter 7 . 2/19/2007
*faints* Hiro is EVIL! NO!

Great chapter! I couldn't tear my ears away from my screen! lol! It is really great! I love this story a lot! Keep it up!
inspiraled chapter 8 . 2/18/2007
You have began a wondeful story here. The way you describe peoples' emotions, settings, and personality is really something to be admired. You are an awesome author and I really adore this fic. I am beginning to hate Natsumi. I guess it's because she seems like a bad person. I am probably still to dense to even have a valid guess to why the two brothers fight. I cant wait until the next chapter.


ps. if by any chance you decide to read my story blood omen, ignore the fact thatthe first two chapters are short. xD

I doubt that you will read it though.
Niki Tori chapter 7 . 2/17/2007
Ha-ha...very funny! _

This chappie had humor and tons of DRAMA! I liked it a lot!

Can't wait to see what Kouji going to do neXt!

UpDatE SoOn!

LovE Ya


P.S: Thanks for all r&r of Working For Affection! *HUGS*
fairyxflames chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
o, your story is really interesting! at first, i wondered what kind of girl would actually follow a random stranger back to his country, it seemed really out there. but then i realized i would probably do the same thing. it sounds like major fun. anywho, can't wait for the next chpater, please update soon!
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
Another great Chapter. Yeah I'm working on the update. I don't know how to end my next chapter.I have it typed up except the ending.. haveing major troubles. But I hope to have it up soon.


Kristie Marie
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