Reviews for Lethal Trust
Da Vinci at Work chapter 4 . 12/16/2006
YAY! New chapter! Very well beginning; tis very psychological. :D
sora-chigau chapter 3 . 12/4/2006
Wow! I wish I could go to Japan with Kouji! He sounds super cute! I can't wait to see where this story goes! You are a great author-very creative! Keep it up! Update soon!
sora-chigau chapter 2 . 12/4/2006
I love it! I love how you set the scenes and your characters. This is a beautiful piece of work. The story sounds like it might have some twist I don't know, but I can't wait to find out!
sora-chigau chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Great story! It really has me addicted. The girl must be strong to drag him all the way to her home. Can't wait to read more!
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 3 . 12/4/2006
WOW! I loved it! Great Job keep writing! Update soon
DiegoManuelR chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Heh well now that I have time to read this. ITs rather interesting :3 The plot goes rather smoothly and so does the transitions to the next chapters. :3
Da Vinci at Work chapter 3 . 12/1/2006

Still going strong, as it had been with the previous chapters. You seem to know a lot about the Japanese culture, with the terms and names. That's amazing. Are you Japanese, by any chance?
EeeNAce chapter 2 . 11/29/2006
Once again, a beautifully written chapter. I like your style a lot and i'm looking forward to reading more of it. I'm also wondering about where you're heading with this. I must say that it's a very original plotline and that this story definitely has potential. Keep going with this. I hope you finish this story (cause some authors only go 1-2 chapters and then stop). I think you've made my favorite author list because I adore your writing style. D
EeeNAce chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
hmm... very nicely written. It's definitely not easy writing a third person story and I must say that you've managed the task very well. Good job!
Da Vinci at Work chapter 2 . 11/28/2006
Your story is still going strong! Awesome. You don't see many third person writings on FictionPress these days. Haha. Update soon!
Da Vinci at Work chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Wow. This is an astounding beginning, though short. Not many grammar mistakes. Beautifully written. I loved the description. The plot seems very promising to me. :]
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
Wow I love this! Im adding this to my alert list.. Cant wait to read more. update soon!
Niki Tori chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
This was SO GOOD! I can't wait to read more!

The flow...WHOA! This is going in my favs!

Until The NeXt UpdaTe

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