Wonderful and amusing little read! I was looking for something light to read and found this. This was great! I loved your characters and liked how this was a complete story. The dialogue was wonderful and amusing. I liked how all your characters just seemed to click. Great work!

I LOVED it! The only criticism i have for ya is that i was a bit confused about the whole "Lick-ee" vs "Lychee" thing...but other than that, phenomenal job!

OH. MY. GOSH. dat was totally awesum awwwwwwwww
can u write one shot on ashley nd jason? plz

For me, I think there's something lacking in this story but at the same time I simply adore it.

It was a pretty normal oneshot. I would have liked it better if there was more background to it, and I'm pretty sure you said Louis was Heather's boyfriend at the beginning of the oneshot, but suddenly he's Ashley's boyfriend at the end? What?
You write well so kudos on that. But I can't say I liked this all that much. IT was just... normal.

Hey! I am here to share some excited news with you! This story has been added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo! :)

Here's the Review:

"“You Say Stubborn Like It's A Bad thing” by Sally Can Wait is a fantastic little read about two friends hanging about in a shopping centre after their friends sneak into the movies to watch Saw II; a movie Leah most definitely does not want to see. Anyone who has had late night adventures around a shopping centre; especially at Christmas; will know how beautiful and magical an occasion this is but throw in an ice skating rink, mistletoe – or is it holly? - and in you are in for a perfect adventure.

This one shot has the added element of humour which seems to come naturally through Sally Can Wait's flawless writing. It's neither awkward or forced and has you smiling along as you read. Despite only being a one-shot and we only see each minor character briefly, Sally Can Wait describes each character that perfectly through Leah's thoughts about each one, you believe that they are a main part of the story and can feel exactly how Leah feels when they bail on her to see a different movie. To be able to do this throughout a one shot is an amazing ability and Sally Can Wait definitely shows us how to do it right!

Once you reach the end of this stunning story, I can bet that you were wishing your late night adventures were just like this..."

Keep writing,

Helen xo

Ahhhhhhhh! That was so so so so adorable and perfect! I loved it :) You did a great job!

iloveiloveilove this! its sweet, its warm, its mistletoe-y, and christmas-y and amazing:) write more:)

Pretty good. Yes, it was a little long, but it flowed really well. i promise, I never thought 'Jeez, when is this going to end already?' But why didn't Leah answer her phone? I don't see how she couldn't have heard it.

Awwww. Soooo cute!

Super cute! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Cute. Nuff said.

loved it!

Loved it! And The Woodlands FTW - I love Market Street as well. The lights make it a super-romantic setting :)

Very nice. I like it muchly. And, for being a writer, I can't think of a single thing other than that to say about it. Sorry.