Reviews for secondary thought processes
lessons you learn chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Wish I had the courage to say that to him.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
makes me want each one of my kisses to be as simple yet overwhelming as this. gorgeous.
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
You portray desire so well here..."soon. soon. and" I thought that really made it feel like there was never enough, lol, it's really good!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
Ah, enticing.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/26/2006

m, imagers are scattered
lackluster chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
the feeling you create between the parenthesis is breathtaking. and i guess in a way it was always there, but that's beside the point.
Three Cheers for Eve chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
I adore how you write - I am a big believer in that short words embody desire, and if that be the case here, then you certainly have plenty of desire.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
this poem makes me sad. :( it's so wonderfully written, so sweet. you can feel the warmth & its just so pretty.

kiss me again.
i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
the perfect words to capture something like that. feelingtouchkissbreak.