Reviews for Life Cord
Rozovian G chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Sounds aggressive. Sounds familiar. Sounds a bit perverse, the first couple of lines.

It's pretty much what happens on my bus ride to school, tho I tend to fall asleep on the bus and kind'a lose track of time a little nowadays.

It has a feel, and that's good enough for me. I don't udnerstand poetry, but if I sense a feel, it's good enough for me.
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Very strong. I often feel, that music couses us emotions that don't belong to us. They definatly let us excape our own lifes, But I feel that isn't what you where saying? The "suck it, suck it" threw me off, I understand it in general, but I don't really.

P.S. I am ill, so it could be that.
RubyXSerpent chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
Wow, intense indeed! I like it, and has a good (Yet somewhat deeper) meaning.

Ha, I should show this to my ipod-obsessed friends.
Aluminum Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
Vivid and intense. Those are my words for this poem. Vivid, intense, creative, eloquent... All good things. )

However, the way you spelled playing (Play’n) seemed to break the flow up a bit. I'm not sure why you spelled it awkwardly, to tell you the truth.

bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
Very well written and vivid. The last few lines are brilliant. I like this a lot, definatley keep writing.