Reviews for Future
michellemybelle chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
This is perfect-everything. The length, the meaning, the last line.
astrocosmos chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
I really liked this one. Your stories have a lot of meaning, even if they are short. and the last few lines hold a lot of impact. i like that.
Birdie num num chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
You should lengthen this a lot more. It's way too short. I like what you have written here, but it's not really a story if you don't develop it more, otherwise you should put it as an essay and not fiction.
Blueskelton chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
Future? shoot I see that right now is that your point?