Reviews for Coming Undone
Preethy chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
This is so sad. I feel so bad for Charlotte. This makes me sad and I feel like crying. I think you the choice of doing the brothers point of view was great, you don't really get that in a lot of stories.
die kleine maus chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
for a one-shot, it's an interesting subject. I liked reading this, though, and I loved how you tied the beginning into the end, the part about the leaves. if you ever want to expand on this, make it a series, you know, of moments in Charlotte's life, perhaps one after the wedding, another from a pre-Amy period...maybe one from AJ's point of view.

even without those, this is well-written and definitely captivating!