Reviews for The love of a prince |
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![]() ![]() Wow... Wonderful story Even with the little flaws and mistakes,the story came out quite nicely. |
![]() ![]() Its my first story in fiction press and i guess i got the right one to start with. The storyline is nice and intersting and well developed. But what about the rest of the story, i dnt think it ends here in ch 14. It'll be very disappointed like this. I hope the rest of the story will be updated soon. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() write more it is so amazing i like it pls when u continue writing pst it on my timeline on facebook as lovina dickson |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story great job! I want to know what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am completely in love with this story! it's simply amazing |
![]() ![]() cute story, but the characters are falling in luv way 2 quickly. as for Sophie who does she luv marcus or david? its a good story but I think u rush things a lil bit 2 much. how can they talk about betrayal when they spoke 2 each others only once, let alone considere themselves in luv... |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon it's awsome |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! I DONT LIKE THE PRINCESS... even if shes pretending.. but i dont know, its a very convincing act. i want Sophie to end up with Marcus! they are so cute! and i hope david doesnt die or end up with someone horrid. PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is the princess going to end up with Marcus? NO! and i hope david doesnt die :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope the princess isnt mad at her :( and i hope she ends up with Marcus NOT DAVID! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i HATE David! i hope she ends up with Marcus :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story :) wheres the prince? lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter :) I just wanted to say, as something to chew on...that this was a really long chapter, with not a huge pay off in the end of it. I agree that it is important to see that the Princess is going to give her a second chance, and that it is probably going to change a lot within the story. But you take a really long time getting there. If you could have added another important element to this chapter, the length of it would have been easier...in my mind. Not that it wasn't good, it was, and I'm so excited that you have another chapter up! It's been way too long. But, I think you could have edited this down...Anyway, I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! |