OMG! OO This story is amazing! I always love a good kitsune story! Hope you update soon.

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more.

I'm kind of confused...just waiting for the disaster, I guess. I think Prem is absolutely darling. He reminds me of my girlfriend a little, the way he was outside the window. That sounds like something she would do. *giggle* Great story. I can't wait to read more!

so... yeah... this was cool. you haven't updated in a while though keep going!

Interesting, a chapter focused on the enemies. Gives the reader a sense of foreshadowing. Anyways good chapter and keep up the good work.

huh? they are in Brazil? uh so they weren't back in tme in the begining of the story? where were they then? argh! I don't get it!

very interesting, getting very very exciting

Good, Good! Keep writing. Now I want to know more about the hounds...*gah* XD

I'd like some more information on the kitsune culture. I don't exactly understand the attachment thing and how they have to revert to fox form when they sleep. I really like the plot line, if you've ever read anything by Christine Feehan, you'll understand what I'm talking about. _ Looking forward to the next chapter!

hurry ur ass up and write the next ch lol kidding. loved the ch tho

I feel bad for his brother I know what its like having a little borhter that doesn't listen to you! I like your story and you should keep going. but how did they go to earth.. did they leave the 'other' world?

I wonder what grown attached to really means with that whole burning feeling and all. Anyways interesting chapter and keep up the good work. (I'm sounding like a broken record...)

OOh! I really like this. It kind of reminds me of a series by Christine Feehan I'm reading that's about Carpathians. _ Keep up the good work!

ur a moron, shut up! love that part! so funny!

Love the subject matter. I'm really into Japanese so it's refreshing to read something I kind of understand! _ Thanks a lot for reviewing my poem, by the way.