|Reviews for Real Hime|
| Forever Forbidden chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
OH! I really like this idea, and Ririn's personality is actually pretty sweet, unlike a lot of other main characters you read about. Good story!
A pointed: Capitalize your first word in speech. It makes reading them a bit easier. "Even the street kids from the other side of town know her, and fear her." It should be feared her. Other wise, the whole Tetsu incident was well thought out!
-Helen (Forever Forbidden)
| peacerocker chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Tetsu seems really cute. Junkyard princess, i think this is a rather interesting name. Cant wait for the 2nd chapter