|Reviews for pierce me with promises|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Interesting piece. The fear is palpable in this. The first staza is my favorite. I also liked this:
don't know how to make all your lovewords
into truth I can touch.
| Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Aw it's so sad...the second stanza is *beautiful* reminds me of the classics...so touching! It's...oh I love it _..so pretty and bittersweet! Hehe, I'll stop blabbering. Great job!