Reviews for flip of the coin
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Interesting piece. This is my favorite part:

a state of visible intention

synonymous with both swimming

and drowning

Love it.
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Filled with gore..."we'd build into the earth a lake like no other" really interesting imagery. You use very powerful words, though this leaves a lot of space for different interpretations. I like it, but it's definitely not one of your best.