Update please!

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"Starbucks, on Fremont and Lake, at six."

I'm on autopilot as I glance at the clock on the wall. Seven thirty.

You changed the times.

You know when last chapter you said that you were trying to limit your use of the word "fuck"?

"How the fuck do you expect me to get the fuck up and go for a fucking drive when you're fucking crushing my fucking lungs you fucking… fuck?"

...yeah, it's totally working.

I would have punched him the second time he called me toots.

I Almost Wet Mah Pants From Happiness. I Squealed About 20 Times And I Did A Happy Dance... I Love This Story.

update soon D

OMG!

That was SO HOT. I'm totally not worthy. I love how he didn't even care that Maggie cheated on him, but then again why should he? He's not even straight. And he's also cheating on her. Haha.

But I would be a little disgruntled at the fact that she cheated on him with his own brother. His BROTHER! Why would Alys do that to him? :S

Oh well, at least he has Jared.

The very hot and sexy Jared.

Oh man, I would've died if that happened to me forget babbling.

oh man!

I can't get enough of trystan! he's awesome. so hilariously in denial. I bet I'll soon be screaming on the inside though. or on the outside. because most likely, I'll get impatient and will want him to pounce on jared already. hahaha. ;)

hmm.. max sounds like he already guesses that trystan's gay? but then again, best friends are pretty perceptive, I guess.

can't wait to see more jared! :D

that was like the perfect opportunity! someone that's gay AND interested. not bad to look at either. we ought to set his closet on fire to get him to come out.

i think reading every third word is sufficient enough. that way i avoid all the "fuck"s

sorry to hear bout evrything. hope you feel better. i really mean it. and i hope you find the time to update someore.

HOLY CRAP - That was so hot! Please update! Hot flushes!

f - u - c - k me.

that was hot.

can't wait for the next installment !

lololololol wow, nice. I adore you for making this chapter. really. i do. one, it was hawt (not just 'hot', so 'hot' that is has to be spelled 'hawt') And i love Jared! How convenient is that "i cheated on you with your little brother" bit. and hes like "YES!" in his head i bet, (besides the bj of course).

I LOVED the Thelma and Louise reference in this, and its awesome because i was listening to the song Thelma and Louise by HorrorPops...

also, was it just me or was the...time all screwed up in this?

nine

six

seven thirty

... :P