Gah! I didn't finish my last review (my cat jumped up onto the keyboard X.X)

So, to finish the last review, I believe I was asking whether there are more ghosts around or is Kate the only one?

ah...sorta funny thing...the author alert for this chapter popped up right as I was finishing (or trying to finish -glares at cat-) the other review P

Just two tiny mistakes that I noticed:

"The black creatures might find me two." too, not 'two'

"the black things wereeverywhere." were everywhere.

Now to my theories/musing, lol.

So...the fallen angels, they were under Miriam's control?

Is the tall dark man an angel, or something close to it? and if so, why is it that only Kate had one ('one' being an angel or w/e). Or is it just that since this is her story, he's the only one we know about. Also, could the other people there see him? I was guessing 'no' because people are looking for him, aren't they?

And now, one real question! Does Kate's ghost or spirit still have her form? As in head, arms, body, etc, or is she more of just...well, I guess an essence...but that's not really the word. Basically, does she have her body-type form or is she this whispy-ghost-floating-type thing (haha, wow, that was a hard description)?

Whoo!, so. Awesome chapter...you're really good with descriptions and the like...update again soon!

] Ari

I realised I hadn't reviewed this chapter yet so...

I was just wondering if you were going to include more on her...ghost-ish state? I remember you said you'd have a lot of religious overtones. So things like animals/cats seeing ghosts, or things they can/can't do...if and when they go to heaven and hell, or why they wouldn't... that sort of thing.

I was also wondering if there are more ghosts around?

i'll be honest, in the beginning i was doubtful of the story, but its coming along pretty well. a little cliche but that's always traditional _. hope you can add a new chapter in soon; i'm really wondering what'll happen between Adrian and Dave (i had my suspicion of them since chap one for some reason -_-)

No, huh... well, we'll see what happens with the diary. Why in the world did they burn her diary? Out of spite? And why would they need to knock off Kate anyway? Where does she fit in the grand scheme of things? Write more!

I made a new account actually. craniumtheft. Needed a new name. It's fairly new, just a couple of days old. So the story. Can you just email it to me? lol, I don't want to wait. :( I'm most excited about seeing how she'll react to Daven and whatsherface. (nod) I love you! Update soon

yay! my questions were answered! I'm anxious for the next chapter, it would be strange to attend your own viewing and funeral, especially with your own murderers there. This kind of reminds me of the Lovely Bones a bit, though the main concept is different. The scene with her parents made me sad though, that was probably hard to write, it would have been for me. Anyway, nice job. I always like your stories!

Becca my love. Amazing story. I've always loved those "oh noes I'm a ghost what's happening around me?" You SAY you have like 18 chapters, but you should put them up. Don't make me wait. It's like waiting for the next episode of Heroes to come on. (amazing series if you haven't seen it yet)

Ok, so, something that the sevenfold society wanted to hide about the guy with the arm... obviously something she wrote about in her diary. anyway, the lovely bones is a book by alice sebold. susie salmon is murdered at 14 and she watches as the world goes on without her providing commentary over the years. you might like it. it's not really scary, more disjointed and... floaty. first-person narrative, like this one. anyway, great chapter. very intersting. can't wait for the next.

Wow, you updated fast!

Yay! You remember me! lol.

Lovely chapter...I liked reading from her ghost point of view, even though it confused me a bit at first.

So, he took her diary from her locker...any reason why (I know...you probably can't tell me 'cause it'll show up later, yeah? P)

Um...two smallish mistakes I caught..."The sounds of rushing footsteps managed to sway my attention from the worry threatening to envelope my." My should be 'me', I think.

And -"There was a jump, not even a sharp intake of breath to prove that either Miriam Rowalsey, or her son, Zeke, had heard me." It should be 'there WASN'T a jump, right? It kinda confused me.

I still can't really decide whether or not I like Zeke...he didn't seem to like what his mum was doing, but he didn't really do anything about it, and then he also burnt Kate's diary...I wanna learn more about him, he seems interesting yet weird in that mysterious (as in...we(readers) don't really know anything about him...) kind of way.

Are we going to see more of the tall dark man? 'Cause he saved her before, but is there really anything he can save her from now that she's dead? Or will he have a different role? I keep remembering that one line, where he said something like 'I like you the way you are'...sounded stalkerish.

Man, there are so many mysteries...the dark man, Zeke, the Society, what happens/do they catch Miriam...

Well, this is starting to get a bit long (compared to how I usually review, anyway) Update again soon!

]

Ari

Oh the book is Lovely Bones. And Wow you are updating this story pretty quickly.

Wow, great chapter.

What is up with Miriam Rowalsey's work? And where was all her friends? Also, I think it's funny that Kate was more concerned about her diary than wondering about Zeke's Mom killing off his classmates and her friends. Oh well, hope you update soon!

You know i'm pretty impressed. I like the general feel and plot. Keep it up, and i'll be waiting for the next chapter. Have fun writting.

-Divs

omg, great chapter. but y does Miriam want to kill her? i mean, it seems like it is something more than her just wanting revenge for Zeke getting beat up. and is there something going on between Daven and Adrien,because it seems a little convenient that they're always disappearing at the same time. anyway, please update soon!

Honestly I love it so far. What you are planning to do reminds me of one of favorite books. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Update Soon Please

What a cliffhanger! Please continue soon, I'm on edge!