Reviews for The Grim Reaper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting so far. I'm doing homework right now so I haven't really read it all, just skimmed. Anyway, me confused about the calm crazy mom, though I'm sure that you'll explain and obviously this will turn out to be very good, like the rest of your stories. So, scary, huh? I'm game! I look forward to more chappies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeeps. I was waiting for the moment Kate would get murdered, but that was totally unexpected. Hm... I'm so intrigued now. I must find out what happens! Zeke wasn't looking at Kate when he came to the social because he knew his mother was going to kill her, I'm guessing. Or maybe not. Maybe I'm looking a little too far into this... Anyway, please update soon! The suspense...it's killing me! Figuratively, of course. - Lithely |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't decide if I like Zeke or not. Usually, I have a solid impression of a character the moment they're introduced, but Zeke's a different type of character, I suppose. I just need to know more about him, I think to really be able to form an opinion on him. Daven...was explosive. I don't really like him (sorry!). But he and Adrian would be pretty cute together. _ I loved the scene when Kate was running and Daven and Adrian were "fighting" over her. It was hilarious. _ Aw, there's only one more chapter for me to read now... - Lithely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. Utter suspense, girl! Good thing there are another two chapters for me to read right now, other wise I'd have some reprimands in hand for you for putting a major cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. Just kidding. _ That was an AWESOME chapter! Pure brilliance. I'm so excited to read the next chapter now! - Lithely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for not reviewing any sooner! I didn't check my e-mail for the past few days... Anywho, I'm glad that I did check my e-mail today because this story is off to a great start. It's very intriguing and mystifying. Not to mention that the main character is actually likeable (I usually despise the main character...). I really didn't notice much reference to religion in this first chapter, but that might be because I'm pretty much dense when it comes to religion; I only know the "surface details." So, I'm off to read the next chapter! - Lithely |
![]() ![]() ![]() argh! please update! that old lady is so wierd..miriam. and does zeke know that his mom is gonna kill her? UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, wasn't expecting that...was she part of that Sevenfold Society mentioned in the first chappie? And I wonder, did Zeke know what his mum was going to do? (and why was he in Kate's locker! Hehe, I still want to know!) Ah! Kate wasn't saved by that (seven foot tall) guy this time! Update soon! I have to know what happens... Oh, and don't worry about the reviews. Your story is awesome! Anyway, the fp bot was down, right?. It wasn't sending author alerts, but it seems to be working now...so maybe you'll get more reviews? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah...what was he doing in her locker, eh? And I wonder...does Daven like Adrian? I sorta thought so the first chapter, before he was really introduced as Kate's boyfriend...but I guess they're just good friends? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another interesting chapter... Gah! Moms...all overbearing and such, always thinking you've done something wrong. 'ess true. Gotta love those conversations that start with "This person did that...YOU haven't done that, right?". Reply: "WHAT? No!" and then she says "I always worry about you...". Hmph. On to chapter 3...I wanna know who this tall guy who keeps coming to her rescue is... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even from reading just the first chapter, I can tell this will be a good story ] I have read every one of your stories, and I absolutely love your writing! I'm not exteremly religious, but I'll try to follow along...religions always interest me, though, so it's all good ] Dude, this first chapter gave me the chills...starting with a 'society' and 'murder'...then creepy-men-in-shadows...-shiver- (or...I may just be easily scared, hehe.) Anyways, I'm on to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() I'm loving your story so far :) Keep up the good work and don't let a low number of reviews discourage you. You're doing a wonderful job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so far! but why was Zeke going through her locker? anyway, he seems like a bit of a creep so far. please update soon, i want to know what happens! |