Reviews for The Grim Reaper |
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![]() ![]() Ah thats sweet! |
![]() ![]() Oh, I feel sorry for her. |
![]() ![]() OMFG! that was freaking intense |
![]() ![]() Gone as in dead? or just passed out? |
![]() ![]() The whole religous thing doesn't bother me. I'm not really all that religious... well i guess I'm not religious at all so... yeah. Great story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not a bad story... the thing is, it took f $& loads of patient and s#! load of spare time to get to the good part... I mean, it was really boring to read a story where nothing happens when you were expecting some supernatural/sci fi/religious ghost-busting action or holic-romance ... which didn't happen until chapter 7! I think that's what turns most people away... it just took so long for Kate's story to have any involvement with the Grim Reaper at all... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is like a giant game of Spot the Underhanded Reference to Mormonism . . . that's great. :D (if it wasn't deliberate, I have to inform you that someone's been playing tapes of LDS teachings in your ears while you sleep) I had /so/ much fun reading this - it was scary, and very interesting from a psychological point of view . . . Kate's character development was believable and fascinating, and character development is tough . . . one of your strenghts as a writer though, I'd say, based on this and Web of Lies (character development there is actually astoundingly well-done, I should note that now) I'd like to leave a more detailed review, but it's kind of hard to review a story as a whole . . . but I just had to say well done! And it leaves itself so open for sequals! :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is getting REALLY good. im so glad she finally has someone she can talk to. hm i wonder if she can undo her past wrongs... |
![]() ![]() ![]() so i've read all your other stories and have just started this one. It's really good so far, but well.. im hoping it gets scary soon heehee. great job so far. ps i love white grape juice lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() w00t! It's such sweet ending! I feel so...sad. 'Cause it's over. Are you going to be writing anything new anytime soon? Anyway, it was a -great- story. The plot and characters all developed nicely. Good job. And thank you for clearing the paradise thing up (I was actually not at the computer when you messaged me, which is a shock...I usually am -always- at my computer X.X). One last question, though. Is what you told me from any specific faith/religion? ] Ari |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wo! Is this the end? I'm asking again I know, but anyways :P Good ending :) End what you start with, that's one way of doing it. Loved the story, can't wait for the next one. It was fun reading it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really liked your story. The way you wrote it was fantastic, and the plot was really interesting, too. So... is there going to be an epilogue? Lol. Yeah, you ended it on a nice note, congratulations for finishing it. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Happy ending. But sad at the same time, cause I always hate when good stories end, cause that means I cant read them anymore. *sigh* Oh well, I guess you'll just have to write another story*grins* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for the ending! I can't believe it's over! My life feels so empty... I will have to put on loud music and jump about. Anyway, an awesome ending for an awesome story! I hope you'll keep writing on fictionpress. I'll look forward to it! |