Reviews for An Unspoken Love
MKSub chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
This is amazing.
Anna chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Beautiful!
BrutusHawk chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
I like this poem. How the love is contrased againist the backgroud. It made the love seem extra like real love.
cassandra12271 chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Good! BUt please change the rating to a K.
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Very Beautiful.
Hunter Brown chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
I really liked it. It had a soft flow. Plus, I was listening the perfect song to with it. It was slow and acoustic. I like your style of writing. I really would like it if you would read To Dare To Dream and Rise Through Song. appreciate the review.
Randomisation chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
like it :D
EnigmaticArsenic chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
this feels very lethargic and brings to mind women in black silken dresses, gray clouds, and buildings in ruin. almost like a late autumn breeze. they rhyming is very nice.
wicked-design-288 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Wow, this is amazing...it's great.

My favorite: "Than screamed behests to wakeful ear. A forgotten language, the world renowned."

Beautiful poem, it has such smooth transitions.
Circus chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Wonderful! Creative rhyming pattern, a feeling that carries through, and of course excellent word choices! That is a trait of yours. Good work, and you know that I can't wait to see more from you.