|Reviews for Annihilation|
| Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Your work really is very original. I love the metaphors and implied meanings that pervade this poem. It certainly proves you can mix advanced poetic devices with your work, which means you are much more flexible artistically then I initially thought. Good thing I kept my mouth shut. You definitely have impressive insight in this poem as well, observing on the growth-potential we get through damaging experiences.
I see a lot of short poems, but not many which say as much as this one does in so short a space. This is extremely well done and my only comment would be that "play piano at my nose" seems a bit too abstract to be clear. Other than that, this poem is very well done. I would say critically speaking that ironing out your technique would be the next step up from here, but that's me being picky :P
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I like the ending a lot.. beautiful piece
| Caroline000 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Cool I really liked it
| hey maria chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
It's very surreal and dreamy, I like it.