|Reviews for The Casey Neil Series: Mystery at the Old Manor|
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 2 . 1/22/2007
Love this so far. Just it needs a little bit more detail. But great so far. Update soon!
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
Awsome! I love the first Chapter! Can't wait to read the second. Keep it up!
| Kayamel chapter 2 . 1/4/2007
Hey, it's me, Neilie. Just wanted to say sorry for "harassing" you, or whatever you said I was doing back on I was just debating. My friends and I do that a lot. It must be a college thing, I guess. XD I get so flustered.
Anyway, I actually really liked this story. It seemed...I don't know if "innocent" is the word, but...I don't know. It was good. I actually cared about your characters. I liked them. Jason seemed a little perfect, but then again, we all want a perfect guy! XD
Anyway, your spelling is mostly good. There are a lot of grammatical errors. You might also want longer chapters. If you want someone to check your chapters over, I can.
Anyway, I like your original fiction somewhat better than you fan fiction. But I've always liked original fiction better than fan fiction...even my own, come to think of it. XD
Happy new year!
| Tracie McDonald Roads Rosek chapter 2 . 12/3/2006
Really good chapter! UPDATE SON PLEASE!
| Kadoodles92 chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
Hey thanks for the reviews! i really like your story so far please update!
| Tracie McDonald Roads Rosekskh chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
This is really good. Please update soon!