|Reviews for Forbidden, Yet There|
| Da Vinci at Work chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
Wow. This is a very tragic one-shot. It touched me, unlike some of the other ones I read on this site. Just one thing, I since you have three people and continue switching perspective, I think you should just keep to one person, maybe Alexander. That way, it works better. You can see the hurt just from his perspective. Beautifully written all the same.