Reviews for My Last Breath
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Wonderfully expressed emotion.
000000000 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
This poem is like an angsty version of the song "Hear Me" by Kelly Clarkson. Or maybe it's just me. xD Anyways, good job! I loved it!
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
I have felt like this so many times before. I hope you feel better soon. Keep up the good work!
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
So depressing, but I love all of the emotion in it. Keep it up!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 11/24/2006
Wow, you sure have a lot of angst. Anyway, I wonder who this is about. It was really good, really sad too. Great job, God bless!