Reviews for Volcano
Love Over Gold chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
Beautiful. Though the ending, as in the last two stanzas, is what really captured my attention. The beginning was nice, but it seemed a bit more awkward than the ending, which ran together perfectly. The last two lines are powerful and the imagery is gorgeous. _ Woo, I'm in love with this poem, this idea, really.

"Nothing could let me let you leave" Seemed very awkward to me. Just small things like that made the beginning a little choppy. Just my opinion of course _

Ry
Emmouse chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
for some reason i found that very hard to read, good use of language though