Alright, I really liked this story. Seriously...Until the end. The queen being alive the whole time and coming out of the stomach and staying in the forest instead of coming home it all just didn't make sense.

I'm not a big fan of this chapter. I found it rather confusing, but I'm not a big Beauty and the Beast fan either, so that might be why. There were a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but we all make those. I think the characters could stand to be more developed, and the story would be better if you made it more realistic. Not many Lords/Kings respect their slaves or prisoners at all and the prisoner doesn't usually have a motherly figure to dry her tears. Anyway, thanks for the review! I appreciate it.