|Reviews for Under A Lover's World|
| Frore chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Pretty! The imagery in this is, while used in other poems before, is very enjoyable. Your word usage makes me smile.
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
This is a nice piece. I liked the effect of the parallelism in the structure of the poem; it helped tie everything together. Keep up the good work!