Reviews for The Girl for Me
partypaprika chapter 17 . 4/6
This is a fantastic story-there were so many parts that I loved! I really enjoyed seeing Kevin and Danny/Dani grow and evolve, both as people and together. I loved how much they balanced each other out and how they pushed each other to be brave and get out there. I liked their relationship and how Kevin was never really "bad", just extremely immature and needing to grow up. And Dani helped him get there!

Your writing was so much fun to read-you did dialogue so well and I loved the humor that showed up. The story did a great job of balancing lighter with heavier and I liked how so many of the side characters also grew throughout the story.

This was so well done and again, I really enjoyed reading it! Your writing drew me in and the story kept me hooked. I couldn't stop once I had started! I'm just so impressed!
Monaa B chapter 1 . 3/12
this chapter is just … WOW! liking it so far
PsychosomaticReality chapter 17 . 2/20
Oh my gosh! I absolutely adore Dani and Kevin and their whole life so much. I want more.. Kevin wins Governor. They get married. The people are ecstatic. Uncle Keith was right all along, Kevin wins President. First Lady Dani!
BICH WTF chapter 12 . 12/29/2019
FUCC THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GENDER DYSPHORIA INDUCING AND DOESNT MAKE SENSE LIKE WHY DOES DANNY WANTS TO TOP KEVIN WHEN HE SAID HE WASNT EVEN COMFORTABLE ABOUT THE IDEA OF USING HIS DICK THAT DOESNT MAKE NO SENSE ALSO HE'S TRANS RIGHT? IM TRANS TOO AND I DONT LIKE USING MY DICKOR EVEN FUCKING SOMEONE'S ASS USING MY DICK BECAUSE THATS FUCKING GROSS AND GIVES ME DYSPHORIA FUCCING DISGUSTING HONESTLY IN MY OPINION DANNY SHOULDT FUCC KEVINS ASS BECAUSE LIKE I SAID IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE THIS IS SO DUMB AND I WAS JUST STARTING TO LIKE THIS STORY
Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2019
IM SO LATE BUT WHY IS NO ONE TALKING ABOUT THIS CHAPTER REGARDING THE "GAY ASSHOLES"? I VERY MUCH APPRECIATE THE FACT THAT YOU MENTIONED THAT SOME GAY MEN CAN BE SO TOXIC TO THE POINT THEYD THINK FEM GAY MEN ARE "RUINING" THEIR COMMUNITY. IN TODAYS TIME GAY PEOPLE ARE ATTACKING THEIR OWN FELLOW GAY PEOPLE JUST BECAUSE THEY ABIDE FROM THE "STEREOTYPE" WHEN HONESTLY THERES NOTHING BAD ABOUT IT. I JUST FEEL LIKE THIS MUST BE SAID OK RANT OVER
FlowerCat13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2019
I finally finished the story today, and when I tell you I was hooked from the beginning, I WAS! I usually go for more mystery, fantasy or thriller but I really enjoyed reading this. I was sucked in and couldn't stop reading. So thank you so much for writing and I can't wait to read more.
Ashley chapter 1 . 9/25/2018
Intriguing. Its hard for me to find a book where the beginning...the first page, is intriguing and catches me in. I dont have a lot of patience to wait and get through a chapter for it to "start" getting better. I definitely want to keep reading
oisqueen chapter 3 . 9/9/2017
Ooo, Kevin never realized his family's "dynamics" before? This is like reading a soap opera script! It's MUCH better I think. It's incredible to me that he knows how to read others but is clueless when it comes to family members! He'd be a good Psych major.
yaoiislife chapter 17 . 7/19/2017
Let me preface this by saying I really enjoy this story. It is one of my favorites to reread. In fact, its getting into the double digits. I love the themes concerning consent, homosexuality, gender and the struggles that are placed in front of people from all sides of the sexuality spectrum.

That being said, there is something that bothered me about their relationship throughout the story when I read it this time. Maybe I've just become more sensitive but throughout the story it really seemed as if their relationship was really unequal. It seemed as if no matter what he did Kevin was seen as some hopeless case who had no control over his own decisions whenever Danny/Dani was around. And no matter what the situation or even if Dani wasn't in the right, Kevin was always somehow wrong. It just seemed as if everyone was abusing Kevin's love for Dani and using it as a way to manipulate and control his life while subtly letting him know how much of a waste of space he was with out her. There were points, like when she sprung the ultimatum on him during dinner with his uncle, or when he was blamed for his relationship with his dad (despite the clear verbal abuse) , that were so blatantly emotionally abusive that it sent a shiver down my spine.

Like I said maybe I'm just sensitive because I've been in a situation where my choices were taken away from me by others "for my own good" . Either way, this story is several years old and you probably won't see this, but it was nagging at the back of my brain and I just HAD to comment.
Ashley chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
i just love this chapter, never know whats coming next .
rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 17 . 4/5/2017
I completely love this, well done. Would have loved to read a scene with Danni actually topping Kevin but that's ok. Thanks for sharing!
ryoish chapter 17 . 11/8/2016
Holy shimmering splendid! This is so so so goood~ thank you author! Love kevin and Dani/Danny/Daniel whatever *grins*
Drengade chapter 17 . 9/20/2016
i love this story, very different from anything i have read before and i am glad i did, i love how these two people, starting out with completely differing opinions ended up caring so much for each other and completely overturning the entire view of everyone they knew. and the climax when everyone stood up to support them... that was perfect.
tgirl chapter 17 . 8/14/2016
A really great read, finished it and will now have very little sleep for work tomorrow. Thanks for making a trans person feel a bit less lonely and depressed.
DoomgirlForever chapter 17 . 3/12/2016
THIS. This is the kind of book that should be a bestseller right now. As a bisexual and non-binary person who has only recently come to terms with my identity, it's so good to read something like this, something that is not only incredibly written and relatable for multiple reasons, but something that also made me think about people, and society, how not everything is clear-cut and what compells us to say and do the things we do. I absolutely love the ending, also! I love how you finished on a happy note, but still gave the impression that, as real people, Dani's and Kevin's stories aren't over yet. There's still so much room for things to happen. Thank you for this wonderful story :)
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