Reviews for The Girl for Me
Pinnacle of Pan chapter 17 . 4/7/2009
I really like this story, especially how Kevin evolved from jerk with the potential to be better to an actual good person. I cringed just a little when Danni went 'manly' because it's like a personality switch exept not really, but it was perfect. Danni/Danny finding her/himself was awesome. Also, it's funny how the guy that's barely even bi ended up heading the 'gay-pride' at the school. All in all, Kevin and Danni are compelling charectors and very, very cute.
Orio K chapter 15 . 3/31/2009
This is my favorite ficpress story. It's so cute, but it brings up valid points and is very "real life." Impressive.
elyrian chapter 17 . 3/13/2009
This story was made of awesome! Seriously, I enjoyed every second. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!
Damien-Rose chapter 8 . 1/28/2009
i don't remember if i said anything about 7 chapter so i'll say it here... i liked it . ok that was a lame thing to say but i'm lame so there and chapter 8 was totally awesome! but i so have to got to can only go so long with out both food and sleep before collapsing and i'm so not going to collapse that would be so embarrassing
Damien-Rose chapter 6 . 1/28/2009
. yay he passed his math test! (hope i pass mine in an hour!)
Damien-Rose chapter 5 . 1/27/2009
. i'm still awake, but anyways . i just wanted to take a moment to say i really like this story .
Damien-Rose chapter 4 . 1/27/2009
sweet! . (runs off to read the next chapter)
Damien-Rose chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
O.O omg! i can't believe that just happened! why oh why did this chapter have to end like this? i have a test in the morning and there is no way i an just stop reading now...and i'm so tired i usually go to bed at 9 (what a wast of my teenage years)and its 1 in the morning! ah! some how this turned into a rant . sorry...but i can't erase it cause...well lets not go there it'll turn into another rant...anyways off to the next chapter!
Damien-Rose chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
. i like the old guy part, it was funny .
Damien-Rose chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
dude! i totally like this chapter and am so goign to read the next one! not very good at reviewing but just thought i'd let ya know what i think. .
h chapter 17 . 1/23/2009

Usually the stories I read ends badly, unhappy or that they simply aren't together in the end. I want to read about true love, with troubles of course, but you need troubles to have something to see the difference with. I mean the happiness. Love.

The ending is.. a bomb of happiness. Really. Almost made me cry. Teary eyed at least.

firebaby chapter 17 . 1/19/2009
This story is happiness, great job! :D
monch chapter 17 . 1/8/2009
gonna say what a great story you wrote. hehehe... really entertaining and great characterization. hehehe...
aino chapter 17 . 1/5/2009
what this was also written by you? :) I went to check your other stories after I read "Alex and Bobby", hoping to find other treats... and it turns out you're the writer of this lovely masterpiece! I've read this one a long time ago and forgot all about it. again, like when it came to "Alex and Bobby", I like the unconventional angle of your stories! I'm not really into cross-dressing, meaning, I don't mind it and think it's cool to do and everything, but wouldn't usually read a story where the main character (or another one of them :P) likes it. not because I have some weird phobias about it, just because... like when you wouldn't maybe read a story about two eskimos getting it on in Antarctica? just not that interesting. (okay, that was one WEIRD example) but for some reason, I read the first chapter of "The Girl for Me" and fell in love with it. there was actually some serious thinking about different sexes and stuff in this! a beautiful relationship of two beautiful persons. these are the kind of slash stories I like to read! and of course I had to stay awake the whole night to read the story. :DD damn, bet you're happy now, stole my sleep and everything! (just kidding)

again, I say the same: you're a great writer and I expect more great stories from you in the future! :)
may chapter 17 . 12/13/2008
woow! this story was wonderful! i love it! thank you so much

i spend the afternoon reading all the chapters and iam really happy thank you again!
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