Reviews for The Girl for Me
Crystal Child chapter 17 . 10/9/2007
This story melted my brain with it's goodness. As hard as it is to find TG fiction, it's so much harder to find GOOD TG. And FINISHED too. :D

This story has seriously made my two days it took to read. I'm definitely going to go check out your other works now.
poufpouf chapter 17 . 9/14/2007
Fucking *amazing* story. Just *brilliant* and God (Or should I write Gawd, instead? ;)) this is such a beautiful, *wonderful* tresaure I've had the chance to come across. Really one of a kind. Wow.

I still have some questions, and I wish there could be more, but that's okay. Because that's how I usually feel when I really LOVE a story.

It was... the perfect ending for this story.

You...You're great, really.

I just... *LOVE* it, you have *NO IDEA* how much.

Thank you.
AnnaG.Luv chapter 9 . 8/16/2007
ah man i expected something to happen but not that.

that's horrible.
AnnaG.Luv chapter 2 . 8/16/2007
Aww this story makes me feel all fuzzy inside.

So far at least. I'm only on chapter two so i'm sure there'll be some bad moments coming up.

Oh well...good stories are always worth it.
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 17 . 7/19/2007
aw, that was such a great ending! the headmaster was such a...lol. music leads to dancing, and dancing to touching. U.U gotta watch out for that fo sho ha ha. great story, great ending, great characters etc etc. loved it!
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 14 . 7/19/2007
ha ha, the shopping trips were funny XD didn't even know what end tables were! i'm so happy that their relationship is going well honestly, what would kevin do without dani? lol probably be a bum. in an expensive apartment . ack, i'm reaching the final chapters! 0.0 my life will be worthless! *spent an entire night reading the chapters* ha ha
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 10 . 7/19/2007
wow. i commented on almost every chapter. god i'm a spazz! but i must say how happy i am! :D the thing i like about this story is that 1)tis funny, 2) teh characters! and 3) how things aren't completely perfect(like in a hopelessly sappy shonen ai manga XD though i do love those too) it makes it more believable. you know when to make things difficult for them and when to let up and allow them to have a nice time together
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 9 . 7/19/2007
aw, poor danny! his poor bum! kevin...agh! such a typical man! . never wanted anything in return. HA. asshole . i know what danny DIDN'T want- to be bleeding from his behind. i'm sounding quite crazy aren't i?(luckily i'm not saying this all aloud...) i talk to characters, i'm sorry! XD *slams face into table* i'm upset now. but hopefully kevin will get his act together. i am intruiged about danny's "problem" too...great chapter(and story in general) :D
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 7 . 7/19/2007
:D yayness! poor kevin, such a conflicted bastard. dany(ooh-er hybrid of the two names!) is such a good person . such a nice chapter, can't wait to read the next one!
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 5 . 7/18/2007
:D yay! ha ha, i'm so happy! kevin's such a spazz, i would be freaked out if i was danny . "WTF? don't just say that randomly, it's freaky!" great chapter
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 4 . 7/18/2007
ha ha, apparently a person with the same name as me is hot in bed! XD though she only has one N on her name U.U lol.

oh i just knew things weren't going to go well on dani's date! those guys were assholes . she still likes boys but she likes to dress like a girl! i don't see what the problem is . aw, they're sleeping in the same room . ha ha
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 3 . 7/18/2007
ha ha, i literally laughed out loud about kevin blowing up the ken doll. his uncle seems like a very stern man, kinda scary! i'm so happy they finally kissed though, it's all over now kevin! XD
crimsonbutterfly23 chapter 2 . 7/18/2007
aw-ness! he's falling for her! XD dani's such a manipulator ha ha! but a girl's gotta have a nice dress even for a funeral U.U great chapter :D
MN chapter 17 . 7/15/2007
This is an absolutely beautiful story. You are a great writer, and geez...you can make it seem so life-like. Heck, this probably isn't completely fiction. It was an inspirational story, to say the least. It's helped me. Made me rethink things about myself, and I find that rare in stories. I'm not just saying that. This story was so romantic...But it wasn't just like all the classical things you'd see from like..i don't know, the sixties or seventies. It's new. And it has events the characters had to get through, and it was realistic problems. People could really learn from this story. sorry, I like to go on about stories like this that give you that satisfying feeling.
Riseile chapter 17 . 7/6/2007
Absolute pure gold. Really shiny gold, too. Funny, shiny, gold. I think I repeated myself. This was a perfect blend of love, drama, humor, and high-school. I have too many favorite parts to list. So amazingly well written.
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