Reviews for The Girl for Me
Ghostmoon Dancer chapter 10 . 12/27/2006
Faboulus story. Can't wait to read more. I really like how it's deep but simple at the same time... if that makes any sense. It's different and interesting, the story is.
mandrake-o chapter 10 . 12/26/2006
Oh they got back together, did they? Good to see.

Random point: You know, traditionally in English, you are supposed to use the word 'an' in front of words that begin with an 'h'. No one does that these days though, besides 'hour' and any words like it that I can't think of at the moment.

) Mandraco.
A Tree chapter 10 . 12/26/2006
And thus Stacy fully corrupts her mother’s mind with the goodness that is yaoi. Fangirling is fun.

Private schools are bitches. I go to a small one in the south, and if you even just say the word queer everyone looks at you funny and the teachers scowl and tell you to hush-up.

I really think Danny’s being too easy on him. But Kevin really is sorry so… Ah well, I guess he suffered enough. Still a bit angry, though not as much as I would have been if he hadn’t just come out and tell him he’d been a selfish bastard.
A Tree chapter 9 . 12/25/2006
Wow Kevin's a bastard.

That aside, I love this story. I've never read anything like it- it's amazingly fresh and beautifully written. I love Dani, and his mom always puts a smile on my face. But Kevin just...

Kevin's a bastard. xo

mookyjoo chapter 9 . 12/23/2006
Why does Dany feel weird about being touched down there? Would that be revealed anytime soon? :)

Oh, and I feel so sad. :( About Dani and Kev's argument thingy.

That must've hurt a lot...
Inherent chapter 9 . 12/22/2006
Stupid fictionpress isn't sending me updates for some reason. Or any of the reviews I've been getting. Which is why it took me two days to review this. I'm hoping I don't have to plead and beg for you to get Dani and Kevin to be okay again, which I don't think I will have to do because I'm going to believe that everything will be sunshine and rainbows...soonish and they'll be happy. Even though Kevin was a horrible, horrible ass. I can't believe he did that. Poor Dani.
UnOriginal chapter 9 . 12/22/2006
muwahahahhaha that was so funNY how Danny was reacting to the blow-job ...

ek Kevin u F*cker lol srew up ek ... _

i hope that Danny will forgive him hm

update soOn

deceptacon chapter 9 . 12/21/2006
haha i love it

and finally the sister appears great

i like it thats not all shiny and pink in their world...

and its just really good


WiseCrack chapter 9 . 12/21/2006
How things are, too true too true.

I had a lotta things to say a while back, but well, that was a while back, so I'll just settle on the present. Then I'll tell ya bout the while back.

I'm feelin for these two, Kevin for his damned selfishness and subsequent helplessness, and Danny for his turmoil and confusion. What that boy must be dealin with right now. And also there's the trust, which always makes for some great angst. Hm. It's kinda weird to say that 'cuz they seem like real people to me and it's weird to talk about people as if they were entertainment.

So to the things I had to say while back. I was just gonna say how, during the beginning stages of their relationship, I loved the way Kevin's character just sorta unfolded steadily throughout the chapters. I mean, the boy ain't perfect, but there's more to him than what appears on the outside. Which Danny saw.

And Danny, he's still a mystery I guess. But the way things are going, I'm thinkin he won't be for long.

Oh yeah, and one more last thing: I started re-reading the story again initially to pass the time while I waited for the next chapter. It's cool to see how the story progresses from there. The first time they saw each other (corny as it sounds) is gonna stick with me for a while. Yeah, that's how great it was.

So, I'll just sit back for a bit and bask in the angst until you take pity and show us some love I guess.
calamity jane chapter 9 . 12/20/2006
Oh no! Poor Danny! Poor Kevin! What did you do? I don't hate you, you're too good a writer, and you know where you want to go with your story. But did Kevin really have to ignore Danny's pleas? Ugh I couldn't believe it, I wanted to slap him myself! What are our fav boys going to do now? I'll be waiting with bated breath to find out (with my fingers crossed too)!

In case you don't update again; HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
Tsuta chapter 9 . 12/20/2006
I like this chapter. I felt like everything was going to well for them and SOMETHING had to happen and screw things up for a little bit. Looking forward to an update :)
Esquirella chapter 8 . 12/18/2006
That was a really great "first time" scene for Danny, and Kevin's love for him really came through.
Orangeena chapter 8 . 12/17/2006
Looks like Kevin is thinking less of Danny the 'guy' and thinking more about Danny the 'person', less physical and definitely more emotional. Exciting! Perhaps soon Danny'll be on the receiving end of oral?

Cheers, happy writing!
Inherent chapter 8 . 12/17/2006
I still love this story, my only complaint is there isn't enough description in scenes. Like in the scene with Kevin and his father, the impact of that scene would have been ten times more amazing if you had written descriptions about how they looked and what their emotions were. The parts in the sex scene were written with the amount of description other parts in the story need. Especially when Dani's mom told Dani that his dad writes gay stories. If my mom told me that I'd react to it more than just "he does?"

The last thing is you wrote that the dinner would be at 1 p.m. Isn't that a little early for dinner? I dunno. I might be wrong, but especially if it's a formal dinner, wouldn't it be closer to five?
UnOriginal chapter 8 . 12/17/2006
ek update im so slow at reviewing *bangs head on the keyboard*

ah they made up so happy coz they had sex aw that was sweet Kevins so nice ...

and the mom she so cute she like a lil fain girl and dressing up Danny like a doll ...

thats goOD that Danny's dad approves hm and a bout his job it reminds me about someone i know *shifty eyes* lol ...

Kevins dads sucks ...

update soOn

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