Reviews for sometimes, denial is your best friend
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
oh, don't we all...

AMEN, SWEEITIE! AMEN!

brill imagery aswell. x
x account closed x chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
parts of this, yeah, my life. namely the betrayl and hypocrasy of it all (though i'm still not sure whose fault it is anyway)

falling in love with phobias. (like you've always been afraid of clowns, and then you find he's been a little circus boy all along). this is how your writing hits me. (cmon and leave me breathless)
by His blood chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
'i-love-betrayal / ireallydoipromise.'

'spit shined and vomit colored'

'those little words, filthybeautiful'

'i-love-betrayal / especially when i'm betraying myself'

perfection and i fucking love it. your words are always honest and beautiful and they give me something to hold onto. i love reading your poetry. and yes, you are amazing.
Anomally chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
The way you design, draw out, and scrunch together certain words gives it this nice little effect where the words seem almost drawn out like a picture. I think its a great touch.
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
the ending is amazing - a perfect way to sum this gorgeous piece together... but i can feel the way this hurts & burns every scar. l.
lackluster chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
the tone is just too perfect and you really have something with the "i-love-betrayal" repetition. yes, i love it.
Artemis Obscure chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
You managed to describe it so well.