I was wondering when you're going to update.

heya, this is a wonderful chappie. i'm glad they stopped devon here, because if they hadn't i probably would've been all "AH! NO!" sorta thing but yeah anyway, congrats on finishing :D i'm glad you appreciate comments and thoughts, and i'm also glad that you had lavi use her magic to stop devon without killing him. i'm not sure whether you did it that way because she was too tired to struggle from a distance and push her magic to kill him or what, but i like the mercy element in it, even if he probably will be punished harshly anyway. my favourite character? hmm, that's kinda difficult. it's not alan because even though i like him i don't think he's my favourite character. and i'm not quite sure that it's even lavi, although i do love lavi's character. i think i'd have to say my favourite character is juliet. she's got this niceness to her, like she was friends with lavi even when no one else was when they all thought she was a witch before she even learnt magic, and she stuck by her friends and was compassionate to the priest who was in trouble. i dunno why i like her so much but yeah, juliet's my favourite character. and i do like alan, lavi and tem too :) so there you have it. wow! long spiel this time, lol. can't wait to see what you come up with next, cya next time ~ Alenor.

It's over? :'( r u gonna write a sequal? i dn't like how u left the ending open w/ lavi and alan's relationship. it seemed fairly closed but it just wasn't enough. & ur right the story was short but it was/is good!

hey this is driew, just under a different account. i couldn't be bothered signing out ;P great last chapter. i was hoping alan would come back. my favourite character would be tem, followed by alan, cause you gotta love a hero, even if he wasn't always one. another brilliant story. i loved it and already can't wait for another. lol.

very cool

next chapter is last...as in the last chapter? wow. that was fast. hah. this was a good chapter though. good ol' tem. heh. cant wait for more.

wow interesting to have gray and his sister helping juliet and tem. it makes sense but it's still quite interesting. The story seems like its going to end soon though. is it? i dn't want it 2. will alan come back in2 the picture?

yes she learned magic! ok i really want to read some more

sry i haven't bn able to review. life's bn crazy. sry 2 that u dn't get a longer review but i want to read lol

heya again, another great chappie. i'm 50-50 on lavi's magic because she used it to kill. although i suppose it was kill or be killed, i just wonder if it will ruin people's view of her more than the shadow of it already has. i suppose that's ok though, because lavi's smart enough not to be corrupted by her magic, and hopefully the people will see that she's using it for good. can't wait for more ~ Alenor.

heya, this is a great chappie. i dunno if i'm glad she learnt magic or not but i can't wait to read more and see what happens. cya later ~ Alenor.

whoa...go lavi! heh. interesting, very interesting. good work.

oh...exciting chapter. great. i really cant wait for the next!

heya, this story is great so far. i can't believe alan left like that though. and i can't believe devon would do something that horrible. can't wait for more to see what happens. i hope devon is stopped. cya later ~ Alenor.

aww...poor lavi. another good chapter. im glad tem's ok. cant wait for more.