Reviews for The Lies
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
I really like the way you worded this piece. I can feel the emotion radiating from it. Great job!
je suis une pomme du terre chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Wow. This is really good. I love the way you wrote the whole poem as if she was an impenatrable fortress, and then you end it in such a contradictory way... Just... wow. Just wow. :P LoL Good job and keep it up.

P.S. Thanks for your review . I love getting them.

Tender Hostility
Wylloa chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
I really loved this, especially the first four lines and the last line... though, when you say impregnable... I think you might mean inpenatratable. Inprgnable means able to get pregnant...but all in all, this was a wonderful poem.

Kudos... i added this to my favs.

-pieces
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Although this poem doesn't seem like something I would usually like, it works really well. Keep writing!
Moi Dix Mois chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Kind of sounds like something I might write...

Nice job.