Reviews for Their Song
Itamidome chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I like this, but it seemed choppy to me. Perhaps it would've flowed better if some of the lines had been combined. A few commas would've helped as well.
Alena D'Etoiles chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Tweeting and chirping! ::claps hands and dances in a cirle for no apparent reason:: I'm high off of Oreos, as you can see. I liked this poem alot. It reminds me of a picture I drew of a duck named Douglas. I'm No, it's better than that, though. I'm gonna shut up. I'm more hyper than I have right to be, seeing as it's, like, really late...WHHE! Oreos!