Reviews for Control
Blueskelton chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
I think your poetry is amazing and this is coming from a person (me) who usually hates poetry. I added you to my c2. If you aren't interested sorry to have bothered you. I was just impressed by your work.
Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Great poem, sad really. I like the 'Stop, Rewind' it made the poem more interesting, good job.

i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
and you'll still be sinning six ways to midnight tomorrow just because the burn hasn't caught up yet. i love this, and i'm living this, and the words make it hurt in an ohsopleasurable way.
fish for stars chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Nice. I love the motif (...?) of control, movie-style. It's very lyrical at the end.